Things I liked:
Saturday Morgan-Lynne. She added a lot of charm to this. She obviously enjoyed the part and fit the role really well.
Good use of humour throughout
The mom was hilarious and meant to be that way. Like something out of the 50's.
The sequence of events made sense and helped the story. Lots of amateur short films are so messy and things just happen. In this one, there's an initial event that causes a reaction (the dad dies and the kidz become zombie fighters), then we see the kidz in action (would have liked this part to be expanded), and then the plot reaches its conclusion (the kidz come back to reality)
The story moved quickly and didn't have scenes that were too long to get the point across
Things that I didn't like:
Max (Clive Holloway) was really wooden, emotionless and hard to watch in this. His type of character is important though. Maybe he was just really really bored but it sounded like he was reading off a dry erase board.
Too short. I wanted to see more when it was over, but this was also a good thing. It would have needed some new and different scenes to keep my interest rather than just longer scenes.
Saturday Morgan-Lynne. She added a lot of charm to this. She obviously enjoyed the part and fit the role really well.
Good use of humour throughout
The mom was hilarious and meant to be that way. Like something out of the 50's.
The sequence of events made sense and helped the story. Lots of amateur short films are so messy and things just happen. In this one, there's an initial event that causes a reaction (the dad dies and the kidz become zombie fighters), then we see the kidz in action (would have liked this part to be expanded), and then the plot reaches its conclusion (the kidz come back to reality)
The story moved quickly and didn't have scenes that were too long to get the point across
Things that I didn't like:
Max (Clive Holloway) was really wooden, emotionless and hard to watch in this. His type of character is important though. Maybe he was just really really bored but it sounded like he was reading off a dry erase board.
Too short. I wanted to see more when it was over, but this was also a good thing. It would have needed some new and different scenes to keep my interest rather than just longer scenes.
