I thought the video was a bit dark. Whether that was an intentional usage of darkness to foreshadow or not, I don't know.
I liked the use of the slow motion video. It was used to highlight the emotional reaction rather than the action. It was a very interesting approach that was used with just the right timing at the points where it would give the most bang for the buck.
The background noises were sparse. A little more background might of added a little to this flick.
I have a soft spot for low budget shorts and this one was coherent, a rarity in the genre.